Week3-4
Peer Review
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This was a great class meeting; we had peer reviews and a final summary with our tutor, Mike.
We had a peer review in the morning. Mike brought in green and red coloured cardstock to guide us through the peer review. We wrote down agreeable, commendable and agreeable points for each other on the green cards; and those we didn't understand and wondered about on the red cards.
My
Comments
I have read the comments from my classmates. In the green card paper, they mainly expressed their favor of my visual experiments.
They especially like my handiwork of watercolor.
Some of them said that they think my work is logical and hope for me to keep going from this point.
On the red card paper, there are some critical comments that I was willing to see.
They came up with many great pieces of advice that I thought was useful.
That is because, in my work, I just focused on what I could see and limited my overall view of the subject.
On the red card paper, there are some critical comments that I was willing to see.
They came up with many great pieces of advice that I thought was useful.
That is because, in my work, I just focused on what I could see and limited my overall view of the subject.
I extracted the main things they mentioned.
1. the plane geometric is hard to understand
2. Lake of connections in different visions.
3. some of the visual expressions may be too abstract, which may cause some confusion and misunderstanding.
I extracted the main things they mentioned.
1. the plane geometric is hard to understand
2. Lake of connections in different visions.
3. some of the visual expressions may be too abstract, which may cause some confusion and misunderstanding.
I extracted the main things they mentioned.
1. the plane geometric is hard to understand
2. Lake of connections in different visions.
3. some of the visual expressions may be too abstract, which may cause some confusion and misunderstanding.
Summary
My work has some good aspects, but I still need to struggle with the visualisations. The important thing that I need to figure out is making a logical language to visualise the poems.
My works on the wall